I have a yugioh deck i made how good is it?

Graceful charity Is banned so take it out, take out 1 amethyst and 1 cobalt and add 2 Pegasus. Take out a emerald and add a ruby. Take out dreadroot and add 2 Amber. Add another rainbow ruins and take out field barrier as ruins protects itself. Take out heroes rule 2 and add a mirror force and now it looks good! Good Luck! :D